Here is a really good discussion on this: Should I put record transcription into Citation or Note
As you will see, it’s really a matter of choice and depends on how you want it to appear in reports.
I like Family Group Sheets and it’s easier for my family to read my transcriptions and translations in the “Note” field of the Event as opposed to in a citation.
I would add your last information re your assignments being diocesan-wide as a nota bene (NB:). I would also put the location of Holy Angels in parenthesis and not brackets. Hope that helps.